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Monday 28 October 2013

Fifty Shades of Disappointment




Fifty Shades of Disappointment
by Jonathan Eddington


The film, Fifty Shades of Grey, is due to start filming soon, and planned for release on 1st August 2014. Many people I know are looking forward to it, but I do not think they will like it. I could be wrong of course, but what follows is an imaginary conversation based on several I have had with fans of the books. The fans parts will be in italics, and mine, normal type. Please let me know your thoughts in the comments at the bottom, and what you expect from the film.

Thursday 24 October 2013

Championship Performance - part 3






Championship Performance - part 3
by Jonathan Eddington



In the changing room for the World Mens Ten Meter Diving Championship, the hopes of Great Britain rest on the eighteen year old shoulders of Tim Dally. Instead of his upcoming performance, Tim has been fantasising about his team mate, Tania, when two girls enter the room wanting special autographs. He signs the naked breasts of Suzy, has both the girls suck his cock, and cums on Liz's face. She kisses him to say thanks.



"Lie down" Liz said breaking the kiss. "I wanna fuck you."

In a daze, Tim lay on the hard damp tiles, not quite sure if he should. Before he had chance to change his mind Liz straddled him and guided his cock inside her. It felt so good, better than he could ever had imagined. Sitting there unmoving, Liz beckoned over Chen and Kai.

"Are you guys not joining us?" Suzy called to Mick and Dan. "I'm feeling a little left out here!" she cheekily added.

Liz guided Chen to one side of her and Kai to the other. She began rocking her hips causing Tim's cock to thrust inside her. Reaching out she took the two other guys shafts in her hands. Although Tim could barely move, he was able to caress Liz's strong supple body with his hands. He felt his way up to her swaying breasts and squeezed them in his hands. Liz gasped in pleasure then sucked Kai hard and deep into her eager mouth while continuing to rub Chen's cock.

Glancing over to where Suzy was, Tim saw her lay on her back on one of the benches. Suzy was still happily sucking and stroking Juan, but now had Dan's head between her legs and Mick licking and sucking on her nipples. As he watched, Juan stepped back slightly and pointed his cock at Suzy's face. She looked into his eyes, smiled, then opened her mouth and flicked her tongue under his tip. Juan groaned deeply and shot his cum all over her face and hair. Tim found himself longing to shoot strand after strand of his cum at Tania's smiling face. Oh, how he wished to see it land on her forehead, cheeks, and lips, then slide and drip onto her beautiful naked breasts.