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Friday 30 January 2015

Creamed



Creamed
by Jonathan Eddington



"Go on," Sue giggled, "do it."

"Are you sure?" Jack panted.

"Yeah. Just don't get it in my hair" she added as she brushed it away from her face.

"You two are crazy" Pete murmured at this unexpected turn of events.

"Yeah, you'll never catch me doing that" agreed Alice, yet the sparkle in her eyes hinted otherwise.

"Go on mate" shouted Mark. "Do it!"

"Ready?" grunted Jack as he gazed at Sue's open mouth, his arm almost a blur he was shaking it so fast.

Before Sue could answer, a thick stream of creamy white shot up her chin, over her nose, and narrowly avoided her eye. Jack held steady for a second burst, this time only getting her neck and chin. The third and final spurt bounced off her extended tongue and deep inside her mouth. Sue deftly caught a precariously hanging drip, then swallowed.

"Oh wow" gasped Sue, carefully wiping away a blob that was sliding towards her eye. "That was not what I expected" she laughed.

"I'm sorry" Jack grimaced. "It was harder to aim than I thought..."

"Never mind that," said Pete, "What about the rest of the bet?"

Read the rest of this story in the eBook, Creamy Sauce.



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It seems that many people have the wrong impression about what this story is about. Which shows that at least part of what I was trying to do worked - write something that sounded rude but turned out not to be at the end.

So for clarification, and for those who don't know what spray cream is, here is a picture that explains what really hapoened.



3 comments:

  1. I liked the playfulness and humor of this piece. Most stories about facials are pornographic to the point where they're demeaning to women. However, your story turned me on without grossing me out--no mean feat.

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    1. Thank you for your feedback. I'm glad you liked it, and can assure you everything I write will be positive towards women.

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  2. An exemplary example of the benefits of team work. Good show.

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