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Monday, 28 October 2013

Fifty Shades of Disappointment




Fifty Shades of Disappointment
by Jonathan Eddington


The film, Fifty Shades of Grey, is due to start filming soon, and planned for release on 1st August 2014. Many people I know are looking forward to it, but I do not think they will like it. I could be wrong of course, but what follows is an imaginary conversation based on several I have had with fans of the books. The fans parts will be in italics, and mine, normal type. Please let me know your thoughts in the comments at the bottom, and what you expect from the film.

Thursday, 24 October 2013

Championship Performance - part 3






Championship Performance - part 3
by Jonathan Eddington



In the changing room for the World Mens Ten Meter Diving Championship, the hopes of Great Britain rest on the eighteen year old shoulders of Tim Dally. Instead of his upcoming performance, Tim has been fantasising about his team mate, Tania, when two girls enter the room wanting special autographs. He signs the naked breasts of Suzy, has both the girls suck his cock, and cums on Liz's face. She kisses him to say thanks.



"Lie down" Liz said breaking the kiss. "I wanna fuck you."

In a daze, Tim lay on the hard damp tiles, not quite sure if he should. Before he had chance to change his mind Liz straddled him and guided his cock inside her. It felt so good, better than he could ever had imagined. Sitting there unmoving, Liz beckoned over Chen and Kai.

"Are you guys not joining us?" Suzy called to Mick and Dan. "I'm feeling a little left out here!" she cheekily added.

Liz guided Chen to one side of her and Kai to the other. She began rocking her hips causing Tim's cock to thrust inside her. Reaching out she took the two other guys shafts in her hands. Although Tim could barely move, he was able to caress Liz's strong supple body with his hands. He felt his way up to her swaying breasts and squeezed them in his hands. Liz gasped in pleasure then sucked Kai hard and deep into her eager mouth while continuing to rub Chen's cock.

Glancing over to where Suzy was, Tim saw her lay on her back on one of the benches. Suzy was still happily sucking and stroking Juan, but now had Dan's head between her legs and Mick licking and sucking on her nipples. As he watched, Juan stepped back slightly and pointed his cock at Suzy's face. She looked into his eyes, smiled, then opened her mouth and flicked her tongue under his tip. Juan groaned deeply and shot his cum all over her face and hair. Tim found himself longing to shoot strand after strand of his cum at Tania's smiling face. Oh, how he wished to see it land on her forehead, cheeks, and lips, then slide and drip onto her beautiful naked breasts.

Thursday, 26 September 2013

Championship Performance - part 1



Championship Performance
by Jonathan Eddington



The final of the World Mens Ten Meter Diving Championships was due to take place in under an hour. In the changing room, twelve young guys were preparing themselves for the most important dives of their lives. The hopes of Great Britain rested on the eighteen year old shoulders of Tim Dally. But unbeknown to him, diving was not the most memorable thing he would be doing today.

"Hey, Tim!" someone shouted from across the room.

Tim looked up to see the Canadian, Rusty McCormick heading towards him, his naked cock semi-erect and getting harder by the moment.

"Vic wants to suck you so deep your balls rest on his chin!" he added, his stiffening member level with Tim's face, and getting closer, "though I'd rather you did that to me!"

"Get lost!" growled Tim and scrambled away.

Rusty laughed and went back over to Victor Maxibaev, the Russian. At a previous event Victor had walked past Tim and slapped his arse saying how he wanted it later. Tim had got so flustered he had almost been knocked out of the competition. This was clearly another attempt to break his composure. Glancing across he saw Victor gently caressing Rusty's now solid cock and kissing him deeply, while looking hungrily at Tim.

Turning away again, Tim tried to picture the incredibly difficult dives he would be performing. Every movement had to be timed to perfection, just as they had been at his last training session. His teammates had gone wild after he had executed every dive perfectly. The guys had given him congratulatory pats on the back, where as the girls had hugged him or kissed him on the cheek. Well most had.

Tania Crouch had hugged him, then held his head in her hands and kissed him. To Tim to it had seemed an eternity, but was really only a few seconds longer than any of the others. He had always fancied her, but been to shy to do anything about it. Many a night he had gone to sleep after a long, hard training session thinking of her. He recalled how soft, yet firm her lightly wet lips had felt against his. Her body had felt so good against his separated only by her swimsuit. Tim's cock began to bulge in his trunks. Embarrassed he draped a towel across his legs as he continued to fantasise about her.

Tim had seen her firm athletic physique naked when most of the team had skinny dipped at a party about a month ago. Watching from a poolside table he had seen her unashamedly remove her bikini top, exposing her small, firm breasts to everyone. They had looked so tempting, particularly as she bent forward to slip off her bikini bottoms. The glimpse of her neatly trimmed bush had made his cock harden. Then she had turned to dive in the pool, and arched gracefully through the air into the water. The sight of her pert bum had threatened to make his erection poke out of the top of his trunks. Back in his room that night he had wanked himself off thinking of her, and what they could do together.

Picturing Tania walking naked over to him, Tim's cock was now throbbing beneath the towel. Oh how he longed to caress her beautiful body and her pert bum as they kissed. Then he would slide his hands up her body and squeeze her breasts, as Tania grasped for his cock and wrapped her fingers around the throbbing shaft. Would it feel the same as when he touched it? Would she kneel in front of him and...

With a bang the door to the changing room flew open.

"Tim!"

Monday, 16 September 2013

Erotica Is Good For You



There are people out there who won't believe this, but erotica is good for you. You don't believe me? Well let me tell you why it's something everyone should read.

Monday, 29 July 2013

Dreaming of You 4 - The Maid



Dreaming of You 4 - The Maid
by Jonathan Eddington



I had a dream about you last night. A hot, sweaty, climactic dream...

Like all dreams it begins in the middle. In this case, the middle of our new young maid cleaning the front room of our million pound mansion. On a huge ornate sofa we are sat in our luxurious bathrobes. On the other side of the room our maid cleans and tidies in the skimpy uniform you provided. As she bends away from us to pick something up, not only does she have to place a hand across her chest to stop her small, pert breasts from sliding out, but her skirt rises so high we can see her white lace panties and the tight curves of her buttocks. I find myself wishing it was you and gaze lovingly into your eyes.

Leaning close, you kiss and nibble my ear as your hand slides into my gown, over my muscular chest, down to my firm stomach, and stops at my crotch. Swiftly I grow hard as your delicate fingers tease my balls then run up and down the full length of my growing erection. Within moments the front of my robe resembles a huge tent. It falls open, exposing me to the room, as you lift your hand from me.

Feeling incredibly turned on at the thought of being seen by our maid, I open the top of your robe freeing your big, beautiful breasts. You sit back and gasp lightly as I tease a nipple with my fingers. The sound causes the maid to glance in our direction. Briefly she stops, a shocked look on her face, but looks away and returns to her duties.

Holding my hand to your breast you kiss me deeply and grasp my erection firmly. With slow deliberate strokes you begin to rub it, as I gently squeeze first one breast then the other. Again the maid looks round, only this time for longer. Your hand moves faster, and now it is my turn to gasp at the pleasure your giving me. This time the maid turns to look right at us for a moment, then moves to dust the enormous fireplace on the side wall. We see her eyes glance at our reflection in the silver candlesticks on the mantelpiece. As you continue to slowly rub my shaft, the young maid moves to the end nearest us. Now she can clearly see us in the almost wall length mirror that hangs on this side of the fireplace.

It feels so naughty having someone there as we play with each other. But will she stay as things heat up?